Hello,
Can you please check my article Energy Efficient Homes? This article was rejected twice. I have made some changes and wish to resubmit it. However, I don't want it to be rejected again. If you check my article and let me know if it's okay, I'll be grateful.
The reason for rejection was as follows :
Still have some typo/missing spaces, etc. // Article exhibits problems with awkward wording. Awkward wording can include awkward word order, unclear/wordy phrasing, and phrasing that does not sound natural to a native English speaker's ear. Additionally, you utilize hyperbole quite a bit (life without electricity would grind to a halt?) Please try to make your point in a concise, grammatically correct manner.
Thanks and regards,
Florette
Rejected twice
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