Yes, you are right. Looking at the article now, the beginning wasn't particularly "original" and there would be far more enticing ways to broach the topic! I'll have a go at that and resubmit
The other day I submitted my first article to constant content. I initially received a rejection because I had a couple of run-on sentences, which I fixed. I submitted the same article again, and received the response: ==== Editorial Information for Your Article: ==== We accept only completely origi...