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by Clifford
Thu Nov 29, 2018 9:29 am
Forum: Questions About Rejections
Topic: An editorial rule about writing without the word You
Replies: 3
Views: 18455

An editorial rule about writing without the word You

I had two articles rejected for use of the word You in the title and the body. The rejections came with these reasons: 1. In title (Are You a New Immigrant? You Need to Avoid Rejections On Your First Credit Card Applications), rephrase to remove you and your. You could say, "New Immigrants and ...
by Clifford
Wed Nov 28, 2018 8:21 pm
Forum: Questions About Rejections
Topic: A request to write without the word You
Replies: 0
Views: 105161

A request to write without the word You

I submitted an article titled "Are You a New Immigrant? You Need to Avoid Rejections On Your First Credit Card Applications." It was rejected for these reasons: Rephrase to remove you and your. You could say, "New Immigrants and Credit Card Applications: How to Avoid Rejection "Y...